Hi, what do you mean by putting the sentence...You said, it makes me ... What does the "it" refer to? Perhaps, you want to write it clearly, by referring to the love between the girl and the boy?
Overall sketch is okay, put more details on the front girl and boy, the lamps and the tree...
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Hi, what do you mean by putting the sentence...You said, it makes me ... What does the "it" refer to? Perhaps, you want to write it clearly, by referring to the love between the girl and the boy?
Overall sketch is okay, put more details on the front girl and boy, the lamps and the tree...
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